Needs
sound and lots of it. The animation was excellant. Maybe add some colour or something. Just improve it and im sure the score will go up alot because you obviously have talent!
Needs
sound and lots of it. The animation was excellant. Maybe add some colour or something. Just improve it and im sure the score will go up alot because you obviously have talent!
Beautiful Just Beautiful
I really liked your background. And the way you acheived flicker effect it was awesome very creative and original. This should have scored better!!
Thanks alot, I really tried to make the background look believable.
I also like the way you incorporate the "vintage retro look" in your movies as well.
Good
Very smooth animation, a bit short though next time make it longer unless your making a series of short toons based on random comments.
Not that good
Try coming up with your stuff first. People will like your cartoons alot more than they do this one! Keep on trying!!
Cool
Pretty Cool and funny the graphics could have been better. But the writing is good. So good job!!
backgrounds
Great use of paper backgrounds. I thought that was really cool
another good review in the middle of a whole bunch of bad ones. I love you people that have respect for my flash.
Infuckingsane
Awesome to the MAXXX
Hmm
Reminds me of salad fingers. Keep on mimicking another animator to learn off,and then soon wou will come up with your own unique style. For instance Dave Teatro,Sam T.,and Marc M. are my major influences. Keep it up! Good JOb
Wierd
It was pretty strange. I thought it was kind of creepy, mostly becuase of your character models "headbutter" looks scary! It would have been better if you actually animated the mouths to make it look like that they were talking I think it would have scored much much better. Other Than That Great Job!!
I like to animate, i dont really have the time for it now, with school and what not, but ill animate again someday soon.
Age 36, Male
Art Student
Brevard College
Greenville, NC
Joined on 6/23/04